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It's true that I'm strong,
but there's only so much I can take
before even a heart like mine
eventually breaks.

Pushed to the edge
time after time again...
who do you think you are?
You, who call me "friend."

I'm just so sick,
so tired of the abuse.
All of this emotional SHIT that
you don't know you're putting me through.

So I'll just stand here.
What else can I do?
You who call me "friend,"
where your promises ever true?

It's true I used to be strong,
but now I begin to break.
There's only so much disappointment
a heart like mine can take.
...fuck...everything...

-September 2008

Enjoy.
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armymanski Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It is strange how people will claim to be your "Friend" and yet be the same people that time and time again stab you in the back in the smallest of ways. Yet enough stabs still lead to a fatality.

I like how you can say "fuck everything" and then turn around with a smile and say "Enjoy". What is stranger is that I look back at myself doing the same.
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MagpieVon Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, thanks for the comment. This was during a very...dark...time of my life. Not the darkest, but still pretty dim. The "enjoy" is how I close pretty much all of my deviation comments, and it's meant differently every time. In this case, it was a very bittersweet smile.
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armymanski Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
We all have those dark and dim moments in life. It is good once we are able to overcome them and see the light in life. But the interesting thing is the best writings come from when your down. More emotion comes out or so it seems.
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MagpieVon Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I also find that some of the best writings come from when you're overjoyed, as well. Some of the greatest love poems, for example.
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armymanski Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You know, that is a good point. Love is a great source of emotion. Unfortunately it is one that doesn't come easily.
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Silvaz Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
Ow...ch... false friends.... never good... :hug: It's a dark, dark, world out there, with not enough light but if you can find it...

(no the light I am referring to is NOT Christianity, lol, I'm an atheist...)
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MagpieVon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I'm more...agnostic, I guess. I believe in God, but my beliefs come from about every other religion out there. I don't believe he's active in this world, but that he does exist.
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Silvaz Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009
You're sort of like a doubtful Christian. Agnostics are waiting for proof.
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MagpieVon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Meh. I'm not necessarily Christian, either, though.
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Silvaz Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009
You're yourself...
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